June 25, 2008
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The challenge: Super Hero
SUPER HERO
The challenge:
Imagine waking up one morning and much to your surprise you have developed a power that no one else has? What would you do with this power? Would you share it with your family, your community, the world? Would you feel obligated, or would you simply keep it to yourself? How would you use it? For good? For evil, for the betterment of mankind?
How would you live your life? Any ideas for names for who you have become? Strategies for living your new life? Tell us!
And now, here are your super powers. You will notice that they are listed according to the alphabet. . . you MUST use your designated superpower! And you MUST use the letter that YOUR XANGA NAME starts with! That is the hardest part of the challenge! Please follow the rules!
T through Z
Your power is telekinesis! You can move things with your mind! With a mere thought you can finally retrieve that t.v. remote control you keep misplacing!
I’m very young. I can remember that. I’m sure I was young. My second teeth are just coming in. I’ve lost my whistle and gained a lisp. I couldn’t even say what was wrong with me. Tela can ethisth. She made me promise. Never tell anyone. Never! Terrible things would happen… to me, to my family, to everyone I love. It’s a secret; a forever secret.
So, I remained silent and in time the memory began to fade. Until today. Today all the memories came rushing back. It’s a secret… a forever secret. My mother’s frantic insistent whispered warnings pound my brain. They will take you away and come for us all. Fear grips my stomach, tightening my throat, stealing the strength from my legs. The secret was no longer a secret.
How long had it been hanging there, floating like a plump silver bee? A quarter slowly settled to the ground as my concentration waned. Hadn’t I just been thinking, probing my pockets for a quarter for the parking meter? I think nobody has noticed. No pointing, no screaming, no mother’s shielding their little ones from the abomination. I’m safe, for now. Surely the surveillance cameras aren’t that refined. I leave the quarter on the sidewalk for some fortunate bum to find.
I must be more careful. My freedom depends upon it. I’ve seen what happens to people like me; the bickering, the bidding, the branding. Whose Telk would I be? That’s easy, whoever has the most money. The pamphlets assure the populace of the exemplary care provided. Think of the good you would be doing, the service to the community… the reward. The Telk’s good behavior guarantees the safety of their family. Of course, they will all be tracked down and tested just in case other Telk’s are being harbored. Telk’s aren’t people, they’re commodities. Telekinesis, the bane of society, an uncontrolled Telk can rob you blind, circumvent the established rationing. Gain without work… upsetting the tenuous balance of equality of the common peoples … abomination.
I’ve never been able to reconcile the reasoning behind the confinement. The Telk must never use their mind for themselves but only for the entertainment, recreation, profit of their ‘sponsor’. Serenity slowly returns as I scan the electronic newsboard. Another tragedy today… the read out flashes along the scrolling screen. A fleeting smile dances across my lips and settles in my eyes. Ten sponsors in ten months mysteriously dead. All have been ruled accidental. How sad.
Tomorrow the planning begins. Again.
Comments (15)
No, MiLady, you are not too late! This is so well done! Congratulations on writing something that makes me want to read more! You've been linked and starred!~Kween
lol well done.
Tela can ethisth - tooo cute!
I sense a sleeping giant was awoken. This is certainly a new sort of post for you. You have departed the Earth and entered the cosmic realm of the great imagination. I am greatly intriguid.
Wow - that was impressive
Great job!!!
Oh, this is GREAT! I really enjoyed this.
Wow! This is a wonderful post. I really enjoyed reading it.
Ahaaaaa.... you have finally let the public know of your literary prowess!!! To be continued?????
Whoa, I was totally into it. I had to reread it to be sure it was a "story". Well done
Very entertaining and a little bit creepy!
@DanishDoll - Yeah, I know.... This is my brain exercise. The ending was a surprise to me and if I were to continue would be is as ominous as it seems. Thank God it's only make believe. I have aways been able to expess myself through non-ficitional essays and devotionals but I've always hit a brick wall with fiction. This is completely so unlike how I normally think. My problem is that I have been very reticent to ever stray into any areas that reveals too much of me when writing. I have a page on revelife where I am more free to share those inner feelings more openly because my family and friends do not know my 'pen name' over there. Quirky!!
Merry Thor's Day!
@qccan - Thank you! I've missed seeing your "snakey" face. Have a great weekend.
I enjoyed reading this heh
Cool! What is this? Sounds like a fun challenge! Can I get in on it?
@Legendairy - Yup. Just go to Kween of the Queens... the author of the first comment to find out what the current topic is. I have enjoyed participating when I can. Thanks so much for stopping by.
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